Journey of a Short Story — Part 4

The Road to Hell is Paved with Adverbs — Stephen King

elcome to Part 4 of Journey of a Short Story. This mini-series is following the journey of my short story Beta Model from first draft to a publishable/revised piece. Along the way I’m documenting my editing process.

Part 1 was the first draft.
Part 2 was the “read out loud” phase where I print it out and read it out loud then…